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Tuesday, January 15, 2019

Intensive Writing Workshop

 ~We are working hard on perfecting our essay writing skills!  We have mastered the thesis writing.  We are now working on adding details to support our thesis and pulling evidence from the text to support our points!  We worked on a fake essay to see what it lacked and what it needed!  Then we got to score it just like ours are going to be scored in April!  We are actually having fun writing!  





~We all agreed, that the essay above was not very good and scored it between 4-5!
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